Task 1 book 7 ielts Cambridge (GT) page 116. Dear mr.Ahmadi ,. I want am
writing to explain about my new job that I got employment two weeks ago. My old
job ...
Task 1 book 7 ielts Cambridge (GT) page 116 Dear mr.Ahmadi , I want am writing to explain about my new job that I got employment two weeks ago.
My old job was very far from my home place and I had some trouble for go and cometransportation. I am very satisfactory satisfied with of my new job. Firstly, it is near my home. Secondly, my new position is better than old job so administration manager promise to me if I have progress in my new position I will get better position. I found this new job from in a newspaper when I read this announcement of newspaper job vacancy immediately I immediately filled my resume and sent it by mail to that company. After two weeks the company called me for an interviewing ; about 15 people came that day. I had was a little nervouse in interview finally the company selected me between them. I would appreciated from you that you read my letter and I hope see you soon Yours sincerely Saeed Task 2 Nodaway the world population is while more and the earth for make building is very low and the same past people can not make the building specialy in downtown. ( the paragraph need to be totally re-written as there are severe grammatical disorders !!)
Comment [PARANDCO1]: Comma needed
More private houses are vicinity big cities. Living in a house and an apartment have advantage and disadvantage that we can say about them: In more houses there are fewer noises from other neighbors and so there are private gardens and yards and extra parkings. But about disadvantages can say: there are security in apartment if a house stay empty several times it possible someone possibly want to thief rob them . Expenditures per year in apartment are very less than houses because a little costs to is division divided between other neighbors. Buy merchandise and sales in apartments are very easier than houses because apartments are very cheaper than houses In conclusion, I agree living in apartments have more advantages from compared with living in houses. The security in apartments is very a lot more than houses but if someone wants to have yard and big storage houses are better than from apartments and I think more people of world have a low great incomes and they can not buy houses they prefer buy apartment and they liveing in them. Estimated bandscore : 4
